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“A Formal Rack/-et”: On Stephen Jonas’ Exercises for Ear

Photograph by Paul Petricone

First published by Ferry Press in 1968, long out of print, Stephen Jonas’ Exercises for Ear was rescued in 1994 when Talisman House republished the complete book in Stephen Jonas, Selected Poems. Over the years I’ve wanted to extend the discussion of Exercises for Ear that I began in my introduction to that Selected, to look more closely at particulars, not-so particulars, local, not-so local, and to jump into the mix anywhere I choose—amidst characters and dramas of a tawdry, highbrow late 50s through mid-60s milieu—to listen to songs of Boston gone.

To begin, these are not poems in a traditional sense. Gerrit Lansing has called them etudes. They are bits and pieces—some complete units, others trail off—snippets of conversations, tongue-in-cheek shouts, persona poems, rants, quick snapshots of Boston above and below ground. If anything, they are a marvelous whole, yet individually they’re more like riffs a sax player is rehearsing on the Esplanade with his case open for coins. No two alike. Melodies of hustlers, junkies, lovers, hipsters and not so hip—sneaky peeks, steamy manhole covers.

Self taught, Jonas’ encyclopedic interests informed his writing. In terms of poetry, William Carlos Williams is central, especially in the Exercises for Ear. From Williams he learned that the local is universal. He learned the value of using American speech idioms. He learned that anything and anyone could be subject of a poem. Olson’s sense of Projective Verse inspired Jonas too. From Olson he gleaned the significance of the poet’s breath as means of composing and mapping out the poem. That sense of breath must have impressed Jonas, particularly in relation to his passion for jazz—the breath his idols Coleman Hawkins and Lester Young had to transfer through their horns.

Screen Shot 2015-03-01 at 7.29.16 PMIt’s like he’s giving a workshop, all sound and sense. Referring to the Exercises in a letter to his friend Raffael De Gruttola, he wrote: “…they’re swinging & let’s hope once & for all the ‘jazz poetry hassle’ be resolved. The methodology that hugs the scene like Zukofsky’s vowels to necks of consonants”.

Jazz is central to Jonas’ aesthetic. Spontaneity and improvisation mean each Exercise can and should go anywhere. It’s not that he wrote and settled for first draft. Jonas worked and revised them in order to affect that sense of spontaneity. It’s less about hitting the perfect note than getting at essential sounds and emotions. Jonas began working with older poems and new material some time around the mid-sixties. Mostly short, to the quick, lively riffs, his intention was nothing short of synthesizing urban idioms, poetry and jazz.

Screen Shot 2015-03-01 at 7.29.27 PMA means of talking back indeed. In some ways Jonas saw the job of the poet as rebel—that unwanted element in society that had the audacity to talk back.

Screen Shot 2015-03-01 at 7.43.20 PMI think for Jonas it might have been a badge—to be scorned, outside “laws”—outside society where at times he might have already felt, being of mixed race and homosexual, both taboo during his time. So the message was take pleasure in being derided. Here also is a classical nod, the allusion to Plato, and the egyptians (small e)—the Exercises stretch from the streets to the classics.

In this Exercise IV, I hear yours and ours in the repetition of yr’s and ar’s. The r’s pick up on this and roll the poem along. The vowel section swings. Consonants snap and do marvelous things like the “n” of “can” (ending stanza) carried over (that momentary silence) and picked up first word in new stanza “n” of “never” which automatically doubles times it forward with ever so that even in this poem of direct statement, the phrasing is all rhythms and rhymes. Jonas’ enjambment (especially w/articles and prepositions) helps with pacing, tension, space, and hang time. Creeley said something like he learned his enjambment from listening to Charlie Parker. I believe him. Jonas learned from Creeley. He’d first heard him on Cid Corman’s radio show and read him in Corman’s seminal magazine Origin. Jonas’ friend Jack Spicer wrote that things correspond.

My new reconsiderations of Exercises for Ear happen to coincide with the Poetry Room’s recent digitization of a 1969 Jonas reading. It is now the only (of two) recorded Jonas readings available. They did a great job cleaning it up. The recording is brilliant—clean, as if Jonas is in the room with you. It contains a selection of Exercises for Ear, along with other poems from his big work Orgasms, and what I think is his great long poem, “Love, the Poem, the Sea & Other Pieces Examined By Me”. I’m instantly struck by Jonas’ elegant, refined tone. The barrage of vowels and consonants so prevalent on the page is almost understated. The voice is confident, he navigates his lines, line breaks, starts and stops seamlessly. This reading catches Jonas at the height of his powers. Though recorded the year before he died, the level of his delivery is stellar. By this point in his life, Stephen Jonas knew that he’d accomplished what he set out to do:

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I look forward to continuing these explorations of Jonas in future installments. Stay tuned.


Curator’s Note:
The Poetry Room’s July 10, 1969 recording of Stephen Jonas was likely made at the Fassett Recording Studio in Boston, where the Poetry Room also made its early recordings of John Wieners and Robert Creeley. The Jonas recording has recently been transferred from its fragile reel-to-reel format and will be made available in its entirety on our Listening Booth in the next few months. Photograph courtesy of Paul Petricone.

Joseph Torra

Joseph Torra

Joseph Torra's latest books are My Ground Trilogy (fiction) and Time Being (poetry). He edited Stephen Jonas, Selected Poems (Talisman Press) and currently edits Let the Bucket Down, a Magazine of Boston Area Writing.
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Joseph Torra's latest books are My Ground Trilogy (fiction) and Time Being (poetry). He edited Stephen Jonas, Selected Poems (Talisman Press) and currently edits Let the Bucket Down, a Magazine of Boston Area Writing.

4 Comments

  1. Michael Franco says

    This is a simply marvelous essay of Jonas … I have long said that Joe Torra of all amongst us can actually say what it is he hears clearly without standard school double speak nor cleaving to the shore of the Authorized ….and I dearly hope he will continue to do it more… this essay charges my own ear and calls me to go fetch my notebook … who could ask for more.

    It also widens Christina Davis’ own work with the Poetry Room; work which has slowly and surely opened the horizon of Poetry World American Local & most importantly Contemporary, creating a deeply vital center from which I am finding renewal and nourishment as I work.

  2. David Rivard says

    Grateful for this, Joe! Thanks to both you and Christina.

  3. Donald Wellman says

    Lovely beyond words. The pitch of the local in the accent, indescribable. Thank you, Joe and Christina.

  4. Joe,
    Gracias. I have not heard Steve Jonas read…wonderful.
    Kudos to you and Christina for bringing him into the air and our ears.
    Peter Anastas read # CLV at David Rich’s “Olson’s Impact” class at the Gloucester Writers Center. I’m going to get it into “President of Beauty” along w/ Baraka, Ted Joans, Langston, Jamie Reid and others.

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